Saturday, February 6, 2016

A Spot of Bad Luck for the Meioses

[This one defeated me, but I'll post it anyways. Meiosis is not the same as litotes; I wish I had known before I started!]

Have some wine. The Meioses?
Remember them? On rocket skis?
They hit a wall at 90 Gs
(Hardly guaranteed to please).
The impact rocked them like a sneeze.
Although it burst their arteries
(A little bit) and scraped their knees,
And hardly helped their allergies,
They made it all seem like a breeze
When they poured themselves upon the trees
Like tinsel, or like strawberries
In a jam too red for comfort. Cheese?

Friday, February 5, 2016

Aposiopesis Would Have Said --

Aposiopesis tries our peace
By leaving us with nothing to rely on:
"I begin a sentence, then I cease,
And just as I have walked away in bygone --"

Antistrophe cheats!

Antistrophe ("I'm the Mistress of Rhyme!")
Has a paradigm for the method of rhyme
Unripe, unsublime, unbecoming a rhyme:
She cheats every time with her terminal rhyme.

Saturday, January 30, 2016

The Twist: From Gimmick to Method

Few techniques in fiction are more dangerous than a twist ending.

All too often, writers lean on the twist to make a story interesting, but in doing this, can shift essential focus away from those other, more important elements of the story.

Writers might also hope to surprise readers, but readers are almost impossible to catch off-guard; instead, they predict the writer's ending long before the writer can spring any surprise. A writer out-guessed can seem unimaginative at best, foolish at worst.

On the other hand, a twist can be useful, not at the end of a story, but right at the centre. Putting a twist at the heart of a story allows a writer to maintain interest, while offering enough time to explore the implications of the twist: implications that transform the twist from a mere gimmick into a major component of plot, character, theme.

Another method is often effective. William Sansom provides my favourite example in "A Wedding," but Eric Frank Russell takes the same approach here. The idea is to present the story in retrospect, long after events have taken place, and then, in the final sentence, to provide one piece of information that shifts the entire story into a new perspective. This information is not a twist, but a fact -- a small detail -- that was not revealed in the course of the story, because the narrator was too engrossed in telling the tale to consider this one small detail important. The narrator takes it for granted, but for the reader, it becomes not a twist, but a bluntly dramatic explanation, an insight into context, a lens that puts the entire story into focus. It does not change the story; it justifies the story.

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Illustration by Matt Fox. Weird Tales, July 1950.

Tuesday, January 26, 2016


Although the world is choked by mental cages,
Anaphora, your strictures cause no fear.
Anaphora, bring pattern to these pages.
Anaphora, remember: life was here.